let me be a patch of earth,
your favourite
most secluded one,
where you often lie
to rest your weary bones.
let me be the ocean
you so adore,
wild and raw so that I may
quench your thirst,
still and calm so that I may
quell your fears.
let me be the sun
so that I may
boldly extend my rays
and gently caress your
smiling, upturned face.
let me be the down
within your pillows,
so that I may
hear the sound of
your midnight murmurs,
as you fall asleep in my embrace.
but oh darling,
we are but human.
I will let you
be you,
so let me
be me.
and you will find
no better solace than
in my arms,
and I
within yours.
February 17, 2017 at 12:23 am
Love it! Short, simple and powerful.
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February 17, 2017 at 3:24 am
Thank you so much! ☺️
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March 4, 2017 at 11:11 am
I want to cry. Can I share this poem? Just heartbroken a few hours ago. And i remembered composing poems like this for my handsome. It’s so lovely, i imagined and felt every words of the poem
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March 4, 2017 at 11:17 am
Hi there! So sorry to know that you’re heartbroken 😕 sending love to you, and stay strong!
I’m glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you so much for your lovely words! Of course you can share it! Just hit the reblog button, and mention the name of my blog in your post if you can! ☺️
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March 4, 2017 at 11:22 am
I will. That poem is intense. Very lovely. Beautifully and carefully written. Write more please. Just followed you. No regrets. I love reading good poems.
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March 4, 2017 at 11:23 am
Wow, thank you so much! Means a lot, and it’s great knowing people appreciate your art! 🙈 I will definitely be writing more, and will be posting weekly in fact ☺️
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March 4, 2017 at 11:25 am
I saw that your poem let me be was shared 165 times. Wow! You call that amateur? You are very humble.
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March 4, 2017 at 11:27 am
What?! I had no idea it was shared that many times hahha 🙈 my blog is actually only 3 posts old, so I still consider myself an amateur 🙈🙈
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March 4, 2017 at 11:28 am
Yes. I saw it in the prompt when I shared it on fb. Hehehe…
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March 4, 2017 at 11:29 am
Oh wow! Thank you so much 🙈 hahha, looking forward to more readers then 🙂
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March 4, 2017 at 1:52 pm
❤ Unique verses that should be used in a song! Enjoyed your posts, thanks for sharing 🙂
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March 4, 2017 at 1:56 pm
Thank you so much for the kind words and feedback! ❤ I’ll be posting weekly!☺️ loved your posts too, and looking forward to more!
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March 4, 2017 at 1:57 pm
You are welcome! 🙂
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March 8, 2017 at 6:47 pm
Beautiful!
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March 8, 2017 at 6:47 pm
Thank you so much! ❤
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March 8, 2017 at 11:22 pm
Reblogged this on Colloquial and commented:
beautiful beautiful, I love this piece.
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March 9, 2017 at 2:13 am
Thank you so, so much! ❤
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March 8, 2017 at 11:23 pm
Beyond beautiful.I re-blogged, I felt each word very deeply, thank you!
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March 9, 2017 at 2:12 am
Thank you so much for the kind words, and the reblog!☺️❤
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March 10, 2017 at 4:06 pm
Beautiful and pure
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March 10, 2017 at 4:18 pm
Thank you so much! ☺️
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March 10, 2017 at 5:33 pm
Welcome
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